People think a law should be exist, so that young people under 18 can not be out after midnight. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued by some parents that they should set a rule to prevent their underage children from getting out
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late at night. I completely agree with
this
opinion and think young children must not
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out after
midnight
for
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own safety. First of all, I believe that
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youngsters home after
midnight
prevents them from falling into unwanted troubles. Rather than allowing young teenagers
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out late at night and let them do whatever
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they desire, which might drag them into unnecessary problems.
For instance
,
according to
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research, there are high chances of getting their life in danger by dangerous
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like petty thieves, muggers, and robbers. Or even get caught in a street fight.
That is
why our younger generation should
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by a strict rule by their guardians from
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late-night visits for their safety.
Secondly
, I
also
consider a law that holds
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youngsters from
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midnight
journeys will restrain youngsters from utilizing unwanted substances that can destroy their valuable younger life.
For example
, there is a higher possibility of the
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for
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harmful things like drugs, cocaine, and heroin. Or force them to use unsuitable things by others.
Therefore
as adults, we should emphasize why it is an import
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such
a law to prevent them from
roming
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roaming
coming
after
midnight
, considering their wellbeing.
To conclude
, I strongly believe
that is
very important to enforce a law for
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people below 18 years of age
from going
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out later at
midnight
. By considering the safety and blocking
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with poisonous substances.

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