The importance of biodiversity is being more widely recognized as increasing numbers of species come under threat. What can be done to maintain biodiversity?

The number of
species
under extinction threat is increasing and
that is
showing us the importance of
biodiversity
. So, to maintain
biodiversity
, one must understand the role of each and every
species
on Earth. In every ecosystem there are 'keystone'
species
that sustains a whole bunch of other animals and plants. Destroying one
such
species
unleashes a trail of destruction
that is
irreversible. There should be an awareness that the oxygen that we breathe is an 'ecosystem' service provided free by
this
biodiversity
on earth. The real power of human beings is that we can destroy everything easily for self-interest and greed.
As a result
, extinction is a great threat to many
species
. Fortunately, it is not late to maintain
biodiversity
.
To begin
with reducing the
water
pollution can create a great relieve on
water
species
. According to the biologists, four fifths of all existing creatures are living in the
water
.
Water
Pollution is reducing the kinds and
population
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the population
of that creature day by day. Chemical and biological wastages are kept polluting fresh
water
reserves and seas.
For
example every
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example, every
year a million gallon of polluted
water
was discharged into the rivers and sea in Istanbul. Because, there were no sewer treatment facilities in Istanbul, the sea became polluted and there was nearly no underwater life. After building sewer treatment facilities,
water
reserves and sea have become clearer. As well as, maintaining
biodiversity
is forestation. Most of the land creatures are need forests for
living
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a living
. Forestation can create new living areas for many animals, especially for cubs. The best example of it is the city of Abu Dhabi. İn the seventies, Emirate of Abu Dhabi decided to create a forest in the desert. After a well-organised forestation plan, they managed to create a forest and it is
attraction point
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an attraction point
to
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for
people who want to see the forest habitat. There are many kinds of creatures from mammals to endemic insects. To summarize, I would like to say that everything on
this
planet is connected and the real losers of
biodiversity
destruction
is
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are
human beings whilst not anything else.
However
, doing small but effective changes we can save plenty of
species
.
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