You ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. Write letter to company. In your letter: explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery. explain the importance of this delivery. ask for replacement item to be sent.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about the recent order I had placed on your website. About 7 days ago I ordered a BP (Blood Pressure) monitor

machine

online, which was delivered to me yesterday.

However

, on checking the contents of the package I realized that it the charger for the

machine

is missing. I had ordered

this

machine

for my grandfather who is suffering from an illness which requires his blood pressure to be monitored at regular intervals. Incomplete shipment sent by you has caused a great amount of inconvenience to us. My grandfather is 80 years old and has restricted movements, we are facing trouble in taking him to the hospital every day for his blood pressure check. The primary reason to order

machine

was to provide him comfort and save time. I would like to know what actions you will be taking to get

this

rectified, I recommend you send me the replacement

machine

with a charger as priority delivery as soon as possible. I have already sent the

machine

I have received to your company address by FedEx – tracking number 123456. I have been a user of your website since 2010 and

this

is the

first

time I have complained about any of your services. I await your response. Yours sincerely, Dean Jones

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

219 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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You ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. Write letter to company. In your letter: explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery. explain the importance of this delivery. ask for replacement item to be sent.

Fully explain your ideas

Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some experts believe that is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages pf this outweigh disadvantages?

Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree ith this view.

Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally Discuss both sides and give your opinion

The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst profesionals in eight groups. Describe the information shown to a university or a college lecture.