write a letter to you friend for missing his birthday celebration

Dear friend, I hope you are doing fine and my belated
birthday
wishes. I am writing here to say sorry for not attending the
birthday
Celebration
due to my tight work schedule. I am feeling a bit down and want to express from the depths of my heart how sorry
i
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am for not being
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part of your
birthday
celebration
. I feel extremely bad for missing to spend the special day with my dear friend and create lifetime memories.And
also
i
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should have
informed
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that
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i
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wouldn't make it because our friendship deserves that notification.I beg for your forgiveness. I should definitely give
explanation
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for whatever happened that day.I could not attend the
birthday
celebration
because of my work deliverable.You see, my
Boss
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walked in and demanded me to complete the work which is due for
next
week on high priority and finish it off on the same day. I happened to stay in my office beyond working hours to complete and share it with business.When
i
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finally
took my head out of the sand,
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couldn't believe your
birthday
party was almost over.I did not get a chance to inform you as well that
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will not be attending your
celebration
. To heal any wounds from my absence,
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want to take you out for dinner at your
favorite
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restaurant Rain Forest and from there we will head to the theatre and check out for a new movie. Based on your availability, we will plan for the
next
weekend. Kindly let me know if you are fine with it. Talk to you soon my friend.Until
then
Take care. Shiva.
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