Nowadays, there is a trend of learning through distance mode of education. Why people do prefer such mode of education? And what challenges are involved in it?

In the era of technology, the trend of
distance
learning is booming across the globe. Every change has certain reasons so the
distance
mode of education is no more exception. But
this
tendency has
also
some problems for learners which I will discuss in
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following paragraphs. The distinct feature of
distance
learning is that it facilitates a learner to learn from anywhere at his/her convenience and
this
is the reason why many more learners are fascinated to get enrolled in
such
programs.
Moreover
, it has proven
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for working people around the world, since it provides
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to
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learners to have little interference in
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professional life. It is an excellent alternative for those who
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their careers or who require some special form of training. Some people who want to gain professional
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or
certificate
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of
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prestigious institutions
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do not get
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to physically join
such
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due to
want of finances or
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permissions
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can make their dream true by studying through
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University. Where
distance
learning has a large number of advantages, it
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some inherent challenges as well.
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that it is not for everyone, since it presents inadequate or rather no physical contact with associate classmates and staff. In
such
learning programs,
students
do not need to attend regular lectures so their queries remain unsolved. Apart from that, many
students
left their course incomplete as they are not timely motivated
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are not in direct touch with their tutors. As per the latest survey conducted, there is a wide gulf between the
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of
students
registered with open universities and the
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of
students
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completed their degrees successfully. In short, because of time flexibility and other reasons,
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working people are interested in joining
distance
learning programs but the challenges involved in it
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also
a matter
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