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Many societies have their own homeless people. Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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It is indeed a fact that many people are not in a position to live at their own house.
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ve impact on their lives and completely disagree with that notion.
To begin
 with, one of the most significant reasons to oppose the idea of giving monetary
support
 to people is because of the high chances of misusage of the fund. It would be a very complex task to have control on the money given to the needy people and tr
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k their expenditure to know whether they are utilizing the
support
 for their house or not.
For instance
, institutions like U.N.O , W.H.O had provided monetary benefits
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 people in south-Asian countries for the upliftment of people.
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0% of the assistance given to the people had not been spent on the desired areas. So, the idea cannot work practically on field.
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 To continue, If the people start getting benefits like these, they may tend to become more dependent on others, rather that being self-reliant. So, as per the famous saying, it is better to teach a hungry-man how to fish rather than giving him a fish.
Hence
, supporting anyone with direct financial assistance would be impractical,
instead
 of
this
, it would be better to provide opportunities and make them self-sufficient to build their own house. To conclude, not only the monetary
support
 makes people to depend on freebies always, but
also
 it would be difficult to track the given to beneficiaries.
Therefore
, I disagree to give direct financial benefit to poor people to make their home.

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