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Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?

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In today's cosmopolitan world it is unusual to find a major city or
country
 where there are no immigrants. People travel more now than they ever did in the past and populations have had to adapt to
this
 transitional lifestyle much more quickly than in the past.
Ultimately society
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Ultimately, society
, as a group of individuals, directs the way that new arrivals in a
country
 are treated. But the government can do a number of things to support
this
.
Firstly
, all governments should insist that schools teach history and
culture
 from more than one
country
, not just the home nation. By learning how others have
lived we
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lived, we
 gain insight into alternative cultures and ways of life which makes us more accepting when we meet people from those countries. Of course we don't have time to learn about the history of every
country
 in the
world but
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world, but
 understanding at least one other
culture
 opens our minds and makes us more tolerant.
In addition
, when immigrants choose to settle in a
country
, the host government should offer free language and
culture
 lessons. It is impossible for new arrivals to integrate if they do not understand the language and habits of their new home. I believe it is important for immigrants to learn the
culture
 of the place they have chosen to settle. By acquiring the language and knowledge about the
culture
, they will be able integrate more easily and comfortably without necessarily losing their own identity.
Finally
 the governments of countries should make sure that they have some stringent laws to protect people from aggression or prejudice so that, should an immigrant face terrible attitudes, they have some protection. By ensuring people feel safe the host
country
 shows that it is civilized and promotes integration. In summary, understanding others is the key to harmonious
living but
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living, but
 laws should
also
 be in place to protect people from those who can't behave responsibly.
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