Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, same people think scientists and

technology

experts are more important than musicians and artists, I completely agree with

this

point of

veiw

a way of regarding situations or topics etc.

view

, as will now be explained. The main reason of my argument is that

technology

can make are life simpler and better.

For example

, almost everyone has some kind of electronic devices

such

as a smartphone, a laptop and a fridge. With the using of

smartphone

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a smartphone

smartphones

, we can connect each other whenever we want from all over the

world

.

Also

, development of transport vehicles like

airplane

, car, train has allowed to us travel around the earth.

moreover

in addition

Moreover

, these days we need to pay

attention a wide range

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attention to a wide range

of global issues like climate change, global warming, endangered species extinction and air pollution. Mongolia,

for example

, smoke level in Ulaanbaatar, the

world

's coldest capital, is highest in the

world

during the winter. The polluted air leads to health

problems especially

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problems, especially

kids. It's hard to predict or solve, but scientists can help us to find a solution way.

On the other hand

, there is an argument that the

world

full of researchers and

technology

specialists is colourless. Artists tend to bring positive in society. In conclusion,

although

entertiner

a person who tries to please or amuse

entertainer

impact us optimistic way,

i

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I

beleive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

development

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the development

of science and

technology

will improve our life. Personally,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

think researchers are valued in public.