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In many places, new homes are needed , but the only space available for building them is in the country side. Some people beleive it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

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A section of the society has an opinion that
money
 is the main key to
happiness
 and happy
life
.
Money
 is a requirement for livelihood. But it is not the only way to
happiness
.
This
 essay discusses how
money
 can make people happy and what are the other aspects that can make people happy in
life
. On one hand,
Money
 plays a vital role in one's livelihood and in maintaining a standard of living. Earning
money
 for Lower class families helps in feeding their family, educating their children and making them independent
in
Suggestion
of
 the society who
otherwise
 would have been subjected to malnutrition and exploitation
for
Suggestion
of
 labour.
For example
, a family of 6-7 members of a domestic servant, driver, cleaner depends on his/her earnings if they are the sole bread earners of the family. Their earnings feed the family and educates their
children which
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children, which
 will get
happiness
 to them by considering the fact that they are in a position to afford food and education to the family.
On the other hand
,
Money
 is not the only aspect that can assure
happiness
 in
life
.
Money
 might help in improving one's lifestyle. But
happiness
 is not always proportional to the
money
 earned.
Money
 is necessary for investment
on
Suggestion
in
 materials that can be measured. But
happiness
 is immeasurable.
For example
, a man of a family works day and
night earning
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night, earning
 more than sufficient
money
 for his family's needs and wants. But can it assure the
happiness
 of the family? The amount of time the man spends with his family brings more joy and
happiness
 to the members and the quality of time he spends with them is immeasurable and cannot be brought from
money
. In conclusion,
although
money
 is a necessity for
measurable
Suggestion
measuring
happiness
, it is not the main way to
happiness
 in
life
.
Happiness
 depends on aspects more valuable than
money

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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