The cultures of many countries around the world becomes more similar than they used to be. What are the reasons for this trend? Is it positive or negative?

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around the globe.

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

220 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Globalization
Cultural exchange
Homogenous
Cultural convergence
Multinational corporations
Cultural diversity
Cultural homogenization
Cultural richness
Cultural identities
Preserving
Erosion
Dominance
Technological advancements
Consumer culture
International understanding

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The cultures of many countries around the world becomes more similar than they used to be. What are the reasons for this trend? Is it positive or negative?

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