In some countries, employees are generally given two weeks of paid vacation time each year. In other countries, employees are given four or six weeks of paid vacation time. Considering the needs of both employee and employer, what do you think is a reasonable amount of paid vacation time for employees to have?

Employees are authorized to take
time
off under labour law. In some countries,
two
weeks of paid vacations are given to workers while others give
four
to
six
weeks paid
time
off. I think
two
weeks of paid vacations are enough from both employee & employer’s perspective.
Firstly
, Annual vacations that employees get, are
in addition
to national & public holidays. On average, combining all national & public holidays totals to about
four
weeks of days off from
work
. Adding additional
two
weeks of annual leaves, these go up to
six
weeks each year. These days off from
work
are enough to fulfil
employee’s needs
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the employee’s needs
.
Secondly
,
Employer
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the Employer
pays salary to employee for days off.
Employer
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The employer
pays not only for these
two
weeks but
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weeks, but
also
four
weeks of statutory holidays without getting any
work
in return.
This
burden of wages without any contribution is enough for
employer
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employers
the employer
an employer
. Some countries do give leaves
of
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about
four
or
six
weeks, it
further
increases
burden
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the burden
of wages on employer and
thus
lowers profitability. In some countries, workers are given
four
to
six
weeks of paid vacation
time
. They believe that more
time
off from
work
will help
employee
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employees
the employee
relax from day to day routine. It will help him
in
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with
increasing
efficiency but
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efficiency, but
I disagree. According to one research, too much
time
away from job makes a person
looses
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
loses
his/her focus and results in list
complecency
the feeling you have when you are satisfied with yourself
complacency
in
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at
work
and
thus
less efficiency. In today’s fast paced world,
time
is money. Taking
four
or
six
weeks away from job affects not only company’s
profitability but
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profitability, but
economy
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the economy
as a whole.
Last
year, I went on vacation to Thailand for twelve days. I was able to complete my wish list in just seven days. I tried to relax for remaining
days but
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days, but
I got bored on
10th day
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the 10th day
. In my opinion as well as from my experience, I think
two
weeks are enough vacation
time
.
This
not only keeps employee’s focus
intact but
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intact, but
also
helps
employer
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the employer
to maintain profitability. Higher profits
means
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mean
higher taxes, and
thus
whole economy
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the whole economy
becomes
beneficiary
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the beneficiary
a beneficiary
.
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