People sleep less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less? What effect does it have on an individually and on society.
Experts throughout both the developed and developing nations are debating about insomnia being spread among individuals like forest
fire
these days. In Fix the agreement mistake
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I will discuss examples from The Times Newspaper and Oxford University to provide illustrations and prove points. Add a comma
essay,
Time
is the most import
aspect of life for an individual in Replace the word
important
this
fast paced
world. Add a hyphen
fast-paced
People
are now spending less time
for
personal development and care than before. The main reason behind Change preposition
on
this
is twofold, firstly
, the stress from workplace
for promotions, Add an article
the workplace
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and competitions
competitions
have increased so much that in a normal office, employees have to work longer hours to hold their current positions and get promotion and raise. A recent article from The Times Newspaper mentioned that the levels of insomnia have risen tremendously among IT workers in Fix the agreement mistake
competition
past
few years because of Correct article usage
the past
“Agile”
development methodology. Correct article usage
the “Agile”
On the other hand
, not only workers but students, especially university ones are also
facing sleeplessness more often these days. Because of tough
and high number of Add an article
the tough
a tough
syllabus
in the curriculum students are spending more Fix the agreement mistake
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time
in
studying and preparing for exams Change preposition
apply
and
reducing their Correct word choice
apply
bed
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bedtime
time
. Research faculties in
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at
the
Oxford University Correct article usage
apply
shows
that students enrolled in Bachelor’s program are studying 18 hours a day to cope with their curriculum and Change the verb form
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spending
only 4 hours for taking rest. Less sleep not only affects Wrong verb form
spend
individuals
health but society as well. Because of insufficient amount of sleep Change noun form
individuals'
individual's
people
have gained tendency
to get angry more often. Correct article usage
a tendency
Also
these days’ Add a comma
Also,
people
are seeking more medical attention than before. A recent survey from Government
of Canada shows that citizens are visiting doctors frequently for mental health conditions like short temper and it was found that the main reason behind Correct article usage
the Government
this
was less sleep. To summarise all the arguments I can conclude that people
should now spend more time
in bed resting and relaxing before prioritizing other things benefiting not only themselves but society.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite