The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the quantities of
fish
and different kinds of meats consumed in a European country between the time period of 1979 and 2004. Over this
span of 25 years, the consumption
of beef
, lamb and fish
have
all decreased Correct subject-verb agreement
has
while
the consumption
of chicken has dramatically risen.
The biggest consumption
in 1979 was beef
(about 220 grams
per person
was consumed every week
) while
the lowest consumption
in 1979 was fish
(around 60 gram
per Fix the agreement mistake
grams
week
was consumed by a person
). The amount of fish
which was eaten has remained almost constant at about 50 grams
from
1979 and 2004. The trends of Change preposition
between
beef
and lamb consumption
were similar, with decreases in amount
Add an article
an amount
the amount
in
between the years. Change preposition
apply
While
beef
consumption
had declined from over 200 grams
per person
per week
to around 100 grams
during
25 years, lamb’s was starting Change preposition
over
150
Change preposition
from 150
grams
to approximately 50 grams
at
the same period.
Change preposition
during
In contrast
, chicken consumption
had grown up gradually to year
of 194, reaching a peak at Add an article
a year
the year
250grams
per Correct your spelling
250 grams
person
every week
in
between 1994 and 2004.Change preposition
apply
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