The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of experts in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of experts in 2016 compared with 2015.
The bar chart and table give information about a country's
export
earnings
from five groups of
products
in 2015 and 2016. It is noticeable that
export
revenues in all but one of the five product categories increased over the period shown.
While
petroleum
products
were the
highest earning
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exports in both years, the textile industry saw the most significant growth in
earnings
.
Export
earnings
from petroleum
products
rose from around $61
billion
in 2015 to $63
billion
in 2016, which was an increase of 3%. Income from engineered goods reached a similar level. The country’s
export
earnings
from these goods went up by 8.5% to approximately $62
billion
in 2016. From 2015 to 2016, there was a 15.24% increase in
export
revenue from textiles, with
earnings
rising from roughly $25
billion
to over $30
billion
.
By contrast
, there was almost no change in the amount of money earned from agricultural
products
, which remained at just over $30
billion
.
Finally
, the only decline in income occurred in the gems and jewellery product group, where
export
earnings
fell by around 5% to approximately $40
billion
in 2016.
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