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You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you

#week #friend #holiday #home #wallet #house #instructions
Dear Katty, How are you? I hope you are doing fine. I just got home safe and sound. I would like to express how thankful I am
on
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 spending a whole week with you and your family. It was
such
 a delightful experience and it definitely rejuvenate my mind. Since I really had a great
time
,
i
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 forgot my wallet
in
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 your house. I thought that I misplaced it somewhere as I cannot find it in my luggage. The
last
 thing I remember was I put it on top of the drawer near your bedroom, I hope
its
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 still there. It contains some identification cards like my driver's license and company health card. They are not confidential but it's important. I do not worry at all because I know it is in good hands. Whenever you have
time
, kindly send it through courier
please
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. Enclose with
this
 letter is my company address, I prefer to use my office address as I spend most of my
time
 here. I am looking forward to
spend
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 more holidays with you and I hope you can come to my hometown and I will be your host
next
time
 around. I can't wait to see you again my friend. Best regards, Joan

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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