You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter • describe a news story in your country • explain why people are interested in it • say how the story personally relates to you

“Being healthy is being wealthy”. A person looking after his
health
is a person who succeeds. At present
working class
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often underestimates the significance of having a healthy lifestyle. A healthy
diet
followed by
moderate
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workout is a necessity to keep your stress hormones balanced.
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essay will present the benefits which a healthy lifestyle can bring into the life of
people
. At present,
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junk food and
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fast food has taken over
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home cooked
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food.
People
prefer grabbing a burger or pizza over having a balanced
diet
. The repercussions of
this
are having
health
issues
such
as high cholesterol, heart diseases and hormonal imbalances. A good
diet
is
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one
which
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has
adequate
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amount of protein, carbohydrates, fats and fibre.
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diet
often gives birth to obesity, which is the root cause of all other
health
issues. There is a saying “ Healthy
diet
and exercise goes hand in hand”. Including moderate exercise or any type of sport in your life is equally important as having a good
diet
. Getting into physical training not only keeps you active
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but
also
helps lower down
of
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Cortisol(Stress Hormones). An adequate amount of training will provide you
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strength, stamina and
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immunity against
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muscle and
movement related
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diseases
such
as arthritis. In India, most
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people
are unable to adopt
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healthy regime because of their hectic jobs. As a solution employers should take initiatives to help them in getting the needful support. Employers should make it mandatory for employees to do muscle stretching exercises in between working hours. It would be a more lucrative step if monthly workshops regarding the current body fat ratio, meal plans and
health
checkup scans could be conducted in the workplace.
This
will not only contribute to their well-being
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but will
also
increase
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productivity. In conclusion; It is a high time
people
should start focusing on their well-being by taking sustainable steps.
This
will not only keep them physically and mentally healthy but will
also
contribute to their financial growth.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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