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Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #shop #food #supermarkets
Dear sir or madam, I am writing to report the lost of my hand luggage during a flight of your company. My property was forgotten
yeasterday
the day immediately before today
yesterday
yesterdays
 on 21st of April between 10 am and noon. The plane was a 311 model, and the small bag was probably left on one of the seats
of
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on
 the 14th line, where I was during the 4-
hours
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hour
 flight. The hand luggage is made of leather in light-brown colour. It will be easy to identify, since there are two colourful front pockets and blue tag with my name and address. Recovering
this
 item would be essential, because it contains an expensive camera and accessories that are critical for my work as a
photogropher
someone who takes photographs professionally
photographer
.
Additionally
, my personal documents,
such
 as passport and
drive
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driving
drivers
driver
 license, are inside as well. I look forward to hearing from you.
Your
faithfully, Cibele Sales
Submitted by bele_sales on

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