You live near a university and would like to earn some extra money by renting a room in your apartment to a student. Write a letter to the university housing office. In your letter, • introduce yourself • explain why your apartment would be a good living place for a student • describe the room you have for rent

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I would like you to know that, I am planning to share my

apartment

with a student. I am

single

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full-time working man, wants to share a

room

which is favourable among the students. I am a Mechanical

Enineer

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Engineer

by profession who is very neat and

punchtual

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punctual

. I usually woke up at 6

everyday

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in the morning and coming back at 8 in the night. I am very keen and joyful

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and living in a dream in

this

heaven. In order to, I am working full-time, my

apartment

will be empty half of the day. It has a perfect

ambious

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ambitious

ambient

for a student. As it is in the most demanding area, it is 7 minutes away from the university and has

the

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grocerry

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grocery

store in the neighbourhood. The

apartment

has

gym

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and swimingpool which is open for all the

teanents

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tenants

tenents

tenets

. The

room

from the

two

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bed

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bedroom

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room

apartment

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includes all the

ammenities

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amenities

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just $375 per month. The

room

has its own bathroom and balcony with

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river view. Please note that the kitchen will be shared. Thanks in advance as it will be gone whoever comes

first

Tue Jan 28 2020

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

189 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

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Appropriate word count

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The Greeting

A big salary is more important. Do you agree or disagree?

A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems can this cause? How might these problems be reduced?

Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected. Others say that few wild animals should be protected instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.