You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he should get a job. Write a letter to your friend . In your letter .say why he would not enjoy going to college .explain why getting a job is good idea for him .suggest types of job that will be suitable for him. write 150 words.

Dear Rohit, How are you doing buddy? I am writing

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to tell you that, my suggestion to you will be to search for a job, rather than thinking of going back to

post graduate

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school for a course. According to

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, I don't think you will have fun if you go to college now.

Firstly

, there are going to be too many assignments, which you may have to prepare and long essays, that you may have to write which you just hate completely.

Secondly

, the age group of students that generally enrol for

this

course are way too young compared to your age.

Therefore

, you may not enjoy the company of the people around you.

On the contrary

, I feel that getting a job will be a much better option for you

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because it will give you financial stability and it will help to improve your confidence level.

Additionally

, it will

also

give you a very good exposure to cooperate life that will boost up your resume drastically. As I know, you have an amazing quality of interpretation and you have received an award in your internship when you worked as an analyst in your previous company, I feel you should search for similar work,

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, the role of an analyst. I am sure will flourish well in that role. Write

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what are your thoughts Lots of love, Sonia