the table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and after it was refurbished. the charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In the given table the comparison of the number of

visitors

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Ashdown

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the Ashdown

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Museum

has been stated on the basis

the

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refurbishment’s before and after year visits.

Apart from

this

in both of the given pie charts, the

satisfactory

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level of the

visitors

has been placed based on the results of the surveys.

According to

the table, the

Ashdown

Museum

had 74000

visitors

in total

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the prior year of the refurbishment but when the

museum

got refurbished the

numbers

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of

visitors

increased to 92000. In the previous year, the

amount

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of dissatisfied

visitors

was nearly 40% but it decreased drastically to 15% after the required actions were taken to convert

this

establishment into a nicely improved one. When the necessary steps were not taken, the visitor's satisfaction was negatively affected

as a consequence

the portion of highly satisfied people was as low as 15%, which later on increased to 35% after the

Ashdown

Museum

got its new modified version.

At the end

of the above discussion, it can be concluded that the refurbishment of

Ashdown

Museum

paid off really well, just as it was expected to perform.