The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram explains the way in which
bricks
are made for the building industry.
Overall
, there are seven stages in the
process
, beginning with the digging up of
clay
and culminating in delivery.
To begin
, the
clay
used to make the
bricks
is dug up from the ground by a large digger.
This
clay
is
then
placed onto a metal grid, which is used to break up the
clay
into smaller pieces. A roller assists in
this
process
.
Following
this
, sand and water are added to the
clay
, and
this
mixture is turned into
bricks
by either placing it into a mould or using a wire cutter.
Next
, these
bricks
are placed in an oven to dry for 24 – 48 hours. In the subsequent stage, the
bricks
go through a heating and cooling
process
. They are heated in a kiln at a moderate and
then
a high temperature (ranging from 200c to 1300c), followed by a cooling
process
in a chamber for 2 – 3 days.
Finally
, the
bricks
are packed and delivered to their destinations.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bricks, process, clay with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacture
  • brick(s)
  • building industry
  • digging
  • extraction
  • raw material
  • clay
  • mixing
  • moulding
  • wire cutting
  • drying oven
  • firing
  • kiln
  • high temperatures
  • hardening
  • cooling
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • traditional
  • modern
  • environmental considerations
  • sustainability practices
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