The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes

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about

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how

cement

is produced and

than

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how building

manufacturer

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manufacturers

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use

cement

to make

concreate

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concrete

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.

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, two illustrations are given in which image one is explaining the whole

process

of

cement

production it explains clearly from top to bottom

that

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how many materials are required for

this

process

.

However

, the

second

diagram is explaining how

cement

are

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used to make concrete for building manufacturing. At first, the

cement

process

needs two main things namely limestone and clay. These can go through

from

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a crusher that makes those elements into powder form. After that, there is a machine attached which is called Mixer in which the powder mix evenly.

Third

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step of

this

process

is

Rotating

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Heater, it is like a roll which

have

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two open holes from one open space powder mixture passes and from

other

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end heat is provided which makes the mixture

in

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a

liquity

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liquidity

liquid

texture. The

last

step of

this

process

is Grinder.

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the substance coming out from heat processed and the final result coming out from Grinder is called

Cement

. The

second

figure shows, how concrete will produce after

cement

.

This

process

only contains four elements which are

cement

, water, Sand and Gravel. Gravel

are

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small stones.

This

step consists of one big concrete mixer that mixes all 4 elements and produces concrete. The main thing

of

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making

this

is to keep every element in a proper ratio which is

cement

must be at 15%, water

in

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10%, Sand and Gravel in 25% and 50%

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respectively

respectivily

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respectively