The diagram below shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1959.
This
diagram illustrates information about the development, which was in the West Park Secondary School
, since its renovation in the year 1950.
Overall
, it can be seen that there were houses and a
farmland, which disappeared Remove the article
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at the end
of the period. Furthermore
, the main road hasn't changed during the past 60 years.
In 1950, there was a main road on
the north. Opposite the main road, there was a Change preposition
in
school
on the left side and some accommodations for the inhabitants. Moreover
, there was a big playground for the children of the school
, to be there is the
break time. Correct article usage
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Next
to the playground, on the left side was a huge farmland.
In 1980, the houses were replaced by a car park and the science block. Furthermore
, the farmland was replaced by a sport
field for Change the noun form
sports
the
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school
activities. In the year 2010, the government increased the car park size and made the sport
field a bit smaller.Change the noun form
sports
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