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The given table illustrates the spendings on advertisements, by companies, broken down into percentages, in various multimedia outlets among three countries namely Australia, South Korea, and Brazil. Overall, the three major media sectors that account for more than half of the advertising expenditure are Tvs, newspapers, and radios. The spendings on advertisements through tvs are almost the same in Australia and South Korea with a percentage of 25 and 27 respectively;
however
, that of Brazil is nearly twice as much as the rest of the two countries with 61%. The trend is not similar to the newspaper as it shows Australia to have the highest amount with 23%, but the amount is slightly equivalent to that of South Korea at 22%.;
nevertheless
 Brazil came down at 16%.
Moreover
, the breakdown in Australia and Korea is exactly the same under radio advertisement with 21% whereas that of Brazil was 15%. The rest of the media sectors
such
 as the internet,
sponsorship
Suggestion
sponsoring
, and direct mail have percentages of 15% and below in the three countries.

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