you work at home and have aproblem with a piece of equipment that you for your job

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction on the
microphone
that was supplied by your company, SBL headphones Limited and would
also
expect a replacement for the same. The
microphone
does not work as expected. The voice quality is really poor and the recipient always complains of the same being unclear. There have been occasional cases when the recipient faces a lot of disturbance in my voice. I work from home and our team is diversely located across multiple countries.
This
problem of the
microphone
does not allow me to convey my message clearly and
also
portrays a poor impression on my employer.
Moreover
, I am not able to collaborate efficiently with the team on the
daily
Suggestion
day
standup and sync up calls. I dread that
this
situation could have a detrimental effect on my job. I want you to give me another
microphone
as soon as possible as it still covered under the replacement policy. I believe you understand how crucial
this
is for my job and expect you to do the needful at the earliest. You
rs fai
Welsh poet (1914-1953)
Thomas
thfully, John Thomos

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