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You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time.in the letter you should say: 　　how you felt about the visit 　　refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her 　　invite your friend to visit you

#friend #hadn #time #visit
Dear Sir/Madam, I received your letter yesterday complaining that the dishwasher in your house had not been completed by the date promised. I feel awfully sorry that the problem has been caused by my mistake about the date for completion and completely understand your frustration and that you are waiting for your hi-tech product. I mistook your date of completion for
next
 week due to my
inattention
an anticipated outcome that is intended or that guides your planned actions
intention
, so the working team installed
this
 dishwasher according to the wrong information. I realize the inconvenience that our oversight must be causing you and will do everything possible to avoid any
further
 delay. I have already given instructions for the work to have priority and 100 CAD has been charged to your account for your
next
 purchase of our products. I assure you that these arrangements should see the installation completed in three days. I hope the settlement of
this
 matter can meet your wishes. Please accept my most sincere apology again for any inconvenience caused. Yours sincerely, Lindsay
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