In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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There are scientists who believe it is necessary to interact with intelligent life forms on other planets and there are

also

scientists who object to it and cautions against it

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There can be be truth in both viewpoints, but we can be sure only after we experience our interaction with them. I feel we don’t have to negate any viewpoints, but should take both the opinions into account. Attempts to contact intelligent life forms on other planets can be beneficial to humanity. They may be of different genetic

make up

the way in which someone or something is composed

makeup

, different skills, and qualities and maybe, managing their own crisis

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Contacting them and interacting with them may benefit us to learn more adaptive ways to solve

crisis

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the crisis

in manners which human beings could never think about.If we get invited

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visiting their

planet help us to

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planet to help us

understand how different organisms are coexisting there and maybe

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that would be an amazing opportunity for us to learn how to coexist in peace and harmony.

However

, it may

also

be dangerous as we are unaware of their perceptions of us and their attitude towards us. The reasons for which may be

many including

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many, including

they may be scared of anything or anyone outside their planet, attacking them or invading their habitat.

Hence

efforts for interacting with them may put entire humanity in imminent danger which may even threaten our very existence. To conclude, I feel contacting intelligent organisms outside our planet provides humanity with numerous benefit, but the effort has to be done gradually with caution. We can

initially

send animals with

camera

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a camera

cameras

connected to them to monitor how

those

plural of "this"

these

organisms are interacting with them and gradually human beings can start interacting with them,

initially

in small numbers and later on in groups, by being cautious of not threatening them.

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