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Some people say modern innovations bring a lot of problems than benefits. Do you agree or disagree?

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There has always been a point of contention whether the drawbacks caused by the latest inventions eclipse the positives or not. If questioned, I strongly disagree with the statement
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 and believe that the cons of
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 justified in the ensuing paragraphs. To commence with, the most significant motive behind any research is to develop new technology or product which is superior to
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 former ones. By
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 version. Ergo, the new version, in a true sense, must be more beneficial.
This
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Moreover
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 inventions take time to get it
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the major class of
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be fruitful. To quote an instance, the erection of fly-overs in
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 crowded city might be troublesome for many who do not understand the long-term rewards it can offer to the population.
To conclude
, the latest developments might have some demerits;
however
, I strongly disagree with the notion that these demerits outweigh all the positive effects offered. The compelling reason behind my way of thinking is that the new advancements mean more advantages
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 previous tribulations. The other logic to support my view is the gap
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 progressions.
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