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The table illustrates

that

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the green areas for 6 different places and those places are Africa, Asia,

Europe

, North

America

, Oceania ,

South

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and South

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America

years

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the years

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1990, 2000 and 2005. Interestingly,

Europe

has

largest

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the largest

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forested

land

and

Ocenia

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Oceania

has the smallest

land

in 1990 , 2000 and 2005.At

the

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different

point

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points

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Europe

has

top

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had top

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and bottom forested

area

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areas

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among

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over

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the

years

. Africa , Oceania and South

America

's green fields decrease

while

it is increased in

Europe

within represented

years

.On the other side ,forested

land

is 989 million hectares in 1990,

however

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forest area kept in 2000 and 2005

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705 ha in North

America

Similarly

, Asia's forested

land

neither increased nor decreased respectively in given

years

Finally

, There is

closest

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the closest

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difference between Africa and North

America

and both are roughly 700

millions

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hectares.

Likewise

, there is around 100

difference

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differences

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between

Europe

and South

America

.In 2005,

Smallest

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the Smallest

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number of green

land

is 197 ha and Greatest is 1001ha in

Europe

and

Ocenia

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Oceania

respectively

Mon Feb 10 2020

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words europe, america, years, land with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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4Word repetition
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17Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

162 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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