Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However,other people think that zoos are useful to protect the rare animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
By
the advent of the internet, Change preposition
With
distance
education has become very popular and many universities now offer different courses through it. Although
,
there are many advantages of learning at one's own place, there are some disadvantages for learners as well. I think the pros outweigh the cons and in Remove the comma
apply
this
essay, I will discuss about
it in Remove the preposition
apply
details
.
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detail
Distance
education has made life
of Add an article
the life
a life
students
comfortable and they can easily sit in their own comfort zone and study according to
the
convenience. Those who are working full time can reap dividends from it, Change the word
their
as well as
, homemakers, single mothers, and also
, those who cannot afford the expense of living in cities and study
. Wrong verb form
studying
For example
, those who are busy during daytime
, when most of the colleges function, can easily spare time during the evening and night to learn. Correct article usage
the daytime
By studying
even through a computer at home can help them to achieve their dreams.
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Studying
However
, there are others who think distant
learning is not appropriate for some Replace the word
distance
students
. It is quite true to some extent, a
student who needs practical training cannot get benefits from these types of learning. Correct word choice
that a
For instance
, medical students
need intensive training to achieve skills to practice, they can only learn theories if they are good at group studies, lectures, practical knowledge and demonstrations. But
, I think these types of education can be beneficial even for medical Correct word choice
However
students
while
studying in a regular college and want to learn more about their course
from a prestigious university, which offers Fix the agreement mistake
courses
distance
classes.
To conclude
, even though there are some drawbacks, but
when compared to the benefits, learning from a Correct word choice
apply
distance
is a boon to many individuals who are willing of acquiring
qualifications in their free time and Change preposition
to acquire
unable
to attend a university.Add a missing verb
are unable
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