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The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions)of telephone calls in the uk, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002 . Summarise the information

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions)of telephone calls in the uk, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002 . Summarise the information
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this
 graph
chart
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 we can see that there are three
catagory
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category
 of call type, first one is
local-fixed
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a local-fixed
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line
,
second
one
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national and international-fixed
line
,
third
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the third
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one
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is Mobiles(all calls) There is
total
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a total
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 number of
minutes
 (in
billion
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billions
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)of telephone calls in the UK,divided into three
categories
,
form
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from
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 1995-2002. At
first
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 we can see that the local fixed
line
 is higher than
other
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the other
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 two
categories
. In 1995 the
rate
 of
local
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the local
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 fixed
line
 is in 70minutes(
billions
).on
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the other
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other hand
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 the national and international-fixed
line
 is in 35 to 38
minutes
 (
billions
). And the
last
mobiles
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mobile
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 (all calls) is in 5
minutes
 (
billions
) . The total
rate
 of
minutes
 (
billions
)of all
categories
 was increased in
this
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these
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 7 years. We can see that the
rate
 of
of
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local-fixed
line
 was increasing till 1999 after 1999 it was decreasing. In category two the national and international-fixed
line
 we can see that it is increasing
form
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from
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 1995 to 2002. The
rate
 of
national
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a national
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 and international-fixed
line
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 is constantly increasing. On other
hand
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  the
rate
 of mobile (all calls) has increased a lot
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more than
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than
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past
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the past
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. The
rate
 of mobiles(all calls) has
huge
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a huge
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 number of
of
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minutes
 (
billions
). It moves so fast than
other
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the other
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 two
categories
.  From the
hole
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whole
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 graph
chart
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 we can see that the total number of
minutes
 (
billions
) was constantly increasing,
accept
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except
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local
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the local
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-
fixed
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fixed-line
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line
.
Local
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 fixed
line
also
 increases between 1995 to 1999 after that we can see that it was decreasing .

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words line, minutes, categories, rate, billions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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