One of the consequences of improved medical care is that the people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Technology enhancements in various sectors of the world have influenced the medical field as well, which improved the health and life term of humans over past few decades.
As a result
, there is a significant increase in the number of old age people who requires more support from government and social organization till their life term. As humans are considered as the most valuable resource
in
Suggestion
on
the earth,
thus
advanced life expectancy would help them to drive to new horizons.
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