With an increasing number of people eating fast food,which if eating too regularly can cause health issues,some people think that the only solution is to ban it completely. To what extent do you agree?

Eating fast
food
is increasing day by day, especially younger are fond of eating
such
type of meals. It is becoming very common nowadays to take
such
type of non nutritious
food
and these causes so many health problems. Many believed that the solution to halt these intake is to ban them. While In my point of view is different from them
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it is the mutual decision of citizens and government to reduce the use of these foods. The essay will discuss the problem caused and
also
the solution of reducing the usage.
Firstly
, in fast paced life people has involved them in multi tasks that they have insufficient
time
to eat properly or cook
food
at home. As cooking
food
at home is
time
taking process
on the other hand
, ready to cook saves
time
.
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.
In addition
, children and adults have developed the taste of eating
such
fast
food
like burgers
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pizza, fries that they hardly think of eating anything else. While these are not healthy diets.
Therefore
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excessive use causes many diseases like obesity, diabetes, cholesterol problems. Obesity is very common in children and its very difficult to control.As they often tend to like it all the
time
in their breakfast
,
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lunch etc. Despite of having scrumptious, palatable taste of eating fast
food
. There should be an awareness of its disadvantages and health issues. People should be more aware it does not contain protein
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vitamins
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calciums which are a vital part of our body necessities. There should be training among children in school level of brining and eating health and proper diet.
Furthermore
, it cannot be done individually, it can be resolved with the support of government and people itself. To conclude, the ban is not only
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the solution is twofold. Either mutual support of all who really intend to stop it and
secondly
awareness through campaigns, media or social media so that everyone should know the causes of excessive usage.
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