In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?
For the past few years, it
is
observed thatWrong verb form
has been
high street
shopping has been diminishing as Add a hyphen
high-street
customers
opt for huge shopping malls
to buy new stuffs
. In my opinion, I completely support Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
this
as a positive trend. There are several reasons people
go to huge shopping centres or mall
. Fix the agreement mistake
malls
Firstly
, people
can find everything in malls
without much struggle. They can not only do shopping but also
has
various other things to do like having fun or meals. Quality is never criticized as there are branded shops. With quality comes durability and it is undeniable thatCorrect subject-verb agreement
have
,
those branded stuffs are being tested for Remove the comma
apply
its
endurance. I remember, once I bought Gucci shoes long back, and I was stunned Correct pronoun usage
their
with
Change preposition
by
its
durability as I am still wearing Correct pronoun usage
their
the one
. Correct pronoun usage
them
Also
, customers
who bring their children or toddlers along has
many options as there is Correct subject-verb agreement
have
play
area for kids to have fun, and for toddlers, there is Add an article
a play
baby
care room available in Correct article usage
a baby
malls
. Meanwhile, customers
can also
enjoy watching movies, shows or events in theatres once accomplishing
shopping. One more thing that attracts Wrong verb form
accomplish
customers
to malls
is restaurants and food
court
. It is Fix the agreement mistake
courts
the
fact that Correct article usage
a
people
travelling to malls
for shopping always end up with meals which ultimately leads in
gaining energy. Change preposition
to
However
, shopping in local malls
is not fruitful in terms of food
since one has to forge for food
which makes them lethargic. To conclude
, as there are plenty of reasons like fun, food
, entertainment and many more, including shopping in big malls
, people
are bond
to travel to giant shopping centres as compared to local shops, and Correct your spelling
bound
this
is the reason for the closure of small shops in locals.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite