A friend who is planning to visit you has asked you to describe the most interesting and enjoyable things to do in the community where you currently live. Write an email to your friend, telling them about these things. In your email, Say what these things are Say why they are interesting/enjoyable Suggest what you can do together

Dear Peter, Thanks for your email and I am so happy that you are arriving
next
weekend. You asked about the interesting things around here.
Well
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Well, firstly
firstly
, we have the downtown area, which has the clubs, bars, cafes and the statues
,
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,
and some sights
such
as the museum
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,
and the well established
harbourfront
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harbour front
which has a
theater
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
, amusement park, water buses going to the Toronto Island and the restaurants offering a variety of continental,
indian
a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived
Indian
and
chinese
a native or inhabitant of Communist China or of Nationalist China
Chinese
food. Apart from
this
The CN tower, almost 473 meters high with a restaurant inside and an Aquarium near the tower, showing marine life. Here is an Idea. When you get here on the weekend, let’s have an early night so that you get over the jet lag and early morning we will go to the downtown area and enjoy breakfast at one of the cafes. Later, we will view some sights
then
we will walk to the harbour front and board on a ferry to Toronto Island and after a long day upon returning home we will again have an early night. On the
next
day, we will go to visit the tower and the aquarium
.
Accept space
.
Please let me know how it sounds before the weekend, and
also
your flight number. All the best, Shivdutt

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