The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies rather than on positive developments is harmful to the individuals and the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I am unhappy about my current living conditions.
Although
my furniture is fine, electricity become unstable after every evening, leaving me in an impossible situation to study. I hope that you could consider my situation favourably. Let me explain you in more detail. It all started two weeks ago when the old electrical wires were replaced by
heavy-duty
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heavy
cables. While conducting the test check, the vendor observed voltage fluctuation
problem
, which he assured to have been fixed by
next day
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the next day
. Since
then
, the
problem
continued to occur every day, which is affecting my studies. Despite repeated requests, neither electrician of the accommodation did not come to fix the
problem nor
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problem, nor
took initiatives to contact the vendor. Would you take
necessary initiatives
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the necessary initiatives
to fix the
problem
? My exam is knocking at the door and I am really in trouble, as I cannot concentrate to my study. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Gibran

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