You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen. But it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to shop manager. In your letter Describe the problem with the equipment Explain what happened when you phoned the shop Say what you would like the manager to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that I bought a pressure cooker from your shop almost 2 days ago. When I decided to use
this
apparatus to make some food for my hubby then
, I found there is an issue at the upper side of the kitchen article. Means its evaporation section had not worked properly. However
, it’s very
essential part to cook delicious food.
I'm sure you offer a solutionAdd an article
a very
,
when I tell you what happened when I called to make a purchase to resolve the above problem. Remove the comma
apply
You
know? Your shop seller's Add an auxiliary verb
Do you
behavior
is very bad with the customer. When I told him about the trouble with the kitchen accessories on the call, he responds as if he doesn't know much about it. Change the spelling
behaviour
However
, he did not tell me the right questions to ask him his questions. He said badly, "I have no time, I will call you back when I am free and after that
he does not call me back."
I would like to tell Add a comma
,that
Correct article usage
the manger
manger
to sort out my equipment issue or replaced it Correct your spelling
manager
by
a new one. I would Change preposition
with
also
suggest him to give proper training to your shopkeepers about equipment’s and tell them how to guide the customers on call?
Thank you for co-operation
Correct pronoun usage
your co-operation
Submitted by hussaintayyab155 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,