You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter:

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walking
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are precaution or medication that can help my fitness level. Yours Faithfully Badmus olayemi

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