The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented pie charts compare the average proportion of
sodium
, saturated fat, and added sugar
in daily meals in the USA. Overall
, it is apparent that breakfast includes the least amount of the three nutrients, while
dinner contains the highest percentages of them except the add
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added
sugar
as it makes the largest proportion of snacks.
As can be seen, the percentage
of saturated fat and added sugar
in breakfast meals is
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are
16
%, which is only 2% higher than the Change preposition
at 16
percentage
of sodium
in breakfast. However
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,However
sodium
makes up the highest percentage
of dinner at 43%, while
saturated fat accounts for 37% and added sugar
is only 23% .
It is noticeable that lunch mainly contains sodium
and saturated fat with 29%, 26
% respectively. Correct word choice
and 26
Although
the proportion of added sugar
is only 19% in lunch, It makes the highest percentage
of snacks at 42%. Snacks also
contain saturated fat and sodium
with 21%,14
%,respectively.Correct word choice
and 14
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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