The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented pie charts compare the average proportion of
sodium
, saturated fat, and added
sugar
in daily meals in the USA.
Overall
, it is apparent that breakfast includes the least amount of the three nutrients,
while
dinner contains the highest percentages of them except the
add
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added
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sugar
as it makes the largest proportion of snacks. As can be seen, the
percentage
of saturated fat and added
sugar
in breakfast meals
is
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are
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the same
16
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at 16
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%, which is only 2% higher than the
percentage
of
sodium
in breakfast.
However
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sodium
makes up the highest
percentage
of dinner at 43%,
while
saturated fat accounts for 37% and added
sugar
is only 23% . It is noticeable that lunch mainly contains
sodium
and saturated fat with 29%,
26
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and 26
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% respectively.
Although
the proportion of added
sugar
is only 19% in lunch, It makes the highest
percentage
of snacks at 42%. Snacks
also
contain saturated fat and
sodium
with 21%,
14
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and 14
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%,respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • typical meals
  • percentages
  • saturated fats
  • fibers
  • sugars
  • impact
  • average
  • consumption
  • trends
  • breakfast
  • lunch
  • dinner
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • implications
  • balanced diet
  • recommendations
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