The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pictures illustrate of design of

wave-energy

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the wave-energy

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machine

and where it is located.

Firstly

, a

waves

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wave

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movement

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of movement

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coming

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comes

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to the

machine

and fills up inside it. After

water

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the water

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levels

rises

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rise

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up to the top of

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the chamber

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chamber

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chamber's

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lower

side

then

it will

produced

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produce

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apply

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air. The air flows from under

side

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the side

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chambers

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the chambers

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and rotates the lower turbine. For

upper

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the upper

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turbine, it is rotated by the air that comes in from

above

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the above

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chamber

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the chamber

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side

, after

all

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,all

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turbines rotate, it will

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result

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resulted

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inresulted

fromresulted

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energy which

convert

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converts

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to become electricity

power

inside

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electricity generator.

Furthermore

, the location of

wave-energy

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the wave-energy

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machine

is determined by

waves

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wave

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power

that

coming

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comes

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inside to lower

side

chamber

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the chamber

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. If

further

the

machine

located

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is located

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from the coastline,

then

power

produced

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is produced

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as well

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higher

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a higher

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cost

needed

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is needed

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to construct the

machine

Otherwise

, if

nearer

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apply

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the

machine

located

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is located

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from

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near

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the coastline, that will make

cheaper

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it cheaper

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to build even though electricity

power

would

smaller

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be smaller

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to produce.

Mon Feb 17 2020

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Vocabulary: Replace the words machine, side, power with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "waves" was used 2 times.

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3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
34Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

156 words

4.50

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Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You have just missed a friend’s party. Write a letter to apologise. In your letter: apologise to your friend explain why you did not attend the party say what you plan to do to make up for missing the party.

As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the past, people used to travel to see the differences from their home country. However, the sceneries in places around the world seem similar nowadays. What are the causes of these similarities? Do you think that the advantages of these similarities outweigh the disadvantages?

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