Write a letter to your boss apologizing for the recent meeting you missed a work 1. Apologize for missing the meeting 2. Explain what happened 3. Say what you will do to compensate

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Dear Mr Drummond. I am writing to apologize for the meeting I missed on October 20th about Development plans for the company. I am extremely sorry for not being able to attend the meeting despite

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feeling the importance of it. The reason for not attending the meeting is that

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I have engaged

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road accident on that day while coming to work. I was rushed

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to the nearby hospital for

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checkup. I was instructed not to leave the hospital without clearance from a duty doctor. I understand how crucial

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meeting was and,

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, I have asked one of my colleagues, Sandra Brown, to review the meeting with me after work today. We will go over all development plans and

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people's roles and responsibilities. By the end of today, I will be up to speed with all plans. I hope you will forgive my absence and be assured of my commitment to

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company and its future. Yours sincerely, Richard

Brollend

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Bolland

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