The diagram illustrates how cases of diarrhea in Mashhad between in 1983 and 1992.

The diagram illustrates how cases of diarrhea in Mashhad between in 1983 and 1992.
The diagram illustrates how cases of
diarrhea
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in Mashhad between
in
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1983 and 1992. It stood at 100 in 1983 and doubled over the
next
3 years, after
then
it slowly went up to 225 in 1987 but
next
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year it
felled
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despite
of
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increased
Diarrhea
.
Then
it didn’t expect to increase in Mashhad in 1988 but
this
disease quadruple over the
next
year. It slightly
felled
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next
year but it didn’t clearly
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. In 1992,
Diarrhea
was completely prevented . In conclusion It can be seen
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diagram cases of
diarrhea
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in Mashhad. It is interesting to note
diarrhea
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slowly increased.
Diarrhea
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rapidly went
to
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peak about 400 in 1989.
Eventually
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it was completely prevented by doctors.

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