The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
GRAPHICS in
THIS
TEST SHOW us THE TOP TEN COUNTRIES
WITH THE HIGHEST ALLOCATE ON TRAVEL IN 2014. THE display of EXPENDITURE IS BASED ON THE CALCULATION OF US $Billion
. COUNTRIES
calculation CONTAINS CHINA
, the UNITED STATES, GERMANY, the UNITED KINGDOM, SINGAPORE, SOUTH KOREA, HONG KONG, INDIA, MALAYSIA, TAIWAN
. Correct word choice
and TAIWAN
GRAPH
IS USED MULTIPLE OF 20 SCALES WHICH STARTS FROM 0 TO 120. THE GRAPH
SHOWED WITH A HORIZONTAL DISPLAY WHICH IS ACCOMPANIED by THE SEPARATOR LINE IN THE SCALE WITH VALUE 4. THIS
GRAPH
WAS RELATED TO THE SOURCE FROM UNWTO
COUNTRIES
WITH THE HIGHEST COSTUMER
Correct your spelling
CUSTOMER
CONSUME
ON TRAVEL Replace the word
CONSUMPTION
2014
FALL INTO Change preposition
IN 2014
CHINA
. The number one COUNTRY WITH CONCENTRATE 110 US $Billion
. Next
RATED ACCORDED TO THE UNITED STATES AND GERMANY WITH 85 US $Billion
, and also
followed by the UNITED KINGDOM WITH 55 US $Billion
, SOUTH KOREA AND HONG KONG WITH 20 US $Billion
, INDIA WITH 15 US $Billion
, then
MALAYSIA WITH 12 US $Billion
. The LAST
RATED in graphic showed by the country of TAIWAN
WITH 10 US $Billion
consumed. COMPARISON OF DONATE USER
ON TRAVEL CHINA
WITH TAIWAN
CONTAINED 100 US $Billion
. As the graph
show
the Change the verb form
shows
USER
EXPEND ON CHINA
IS 11 TIMES LARGER THAN TAIWAN
. THERE ARE 2 STATE COUNTRIES
THAT HAVE THE EQUATION OF SPENDING COSTUMERS each other. Some COUNTRIES
IN ASIA was
telling us to CONTINUE and DOMINATE the Correct subject-verb agreement
were
ALLOCATE
Replace the word
allocated
USER
COMPARED TO OTHER continents.
THE CHINA
COUNTRY BECOMES THE BIGGEST SPENDING USER
IN 2014. CHINA
NEIGHBOURING Change noun form
CHINA'S
COUNTRIES
, HONG KONG AND TAIWAN
ARE INCLUDED IN LIST
. THAT Correct article usage
THE LIST
ALSO
RELATED TO Add a missing verb
IS ALSO
NUMBER
OF POPULATIONS WHERE THERE ARE POTENTIALS FOR VERY BIG TRAVELS.Correct article usage
THE NUMBER
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, billion, china, taiwan, graph, user with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 4 times.
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