Many people believe that social networking sites have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

#people #sites #impact #individuals #society

Many people believe that social networking sites have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree? Many people consider that

Internet

Suggestion

the Internet

is not useful for humans, it influences badly to their behaviour, way of lives etc.

Suggestion

some points I agree with

this

view, but it would be

injustice

Suggestion

an injustice

not to stress its positive sides.

First

of all, in my view, it is impossible to imagine life without

Internet

Suggestion

the Internet

. We get everything there, it is our main source of knowledge. Nowadays, some

use

Suggestion

are using

it for literacy,

such

as read books, magazines, search research materials etc. Beside

this

others advertise their goods and expand their business in

this

way.

For example

: one of my relatives is a master and by advertising his works in Facebook and other sites he has broadened his business and is well known in

this

sector.

On the other hand

, it would be better to talk about its negative aspects too. As

Suggestion

for

me, sometimes humans do not take advantage of it correctly. It means that while these networking sites having a multitude of good

sides they

Accept comma addition

sides, they

try to use it as a means of entertainment, they watch show programmes, play games etc.

In other

words they

Accept comma addition

words, they

waste time in surfing the Internet without knowing the value of their time. In

this

way they nor only spoil themselves, at the same time harm their health too. Some companies delivering harmful information may change weak willed people's views and they fall under these

evils

Suggestion

evil

' influence. Children should be forbidden to use these sites for the benefit of their future. Apart from individuals, society suffers a lot if its citizens' views are controlled by

such

harmful sites. In conclusion, it is my opinion that networking sites in one hand can broade

n humans ' possibiliti

Suggestion

the humans ' possibilities

es,

on the other hand

they can ruin others' views by entering their lives

Submitted by ferman.medetov on Mon Feb 24 2020

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS writing?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

317 words

4.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

Topic Vocabulary:

social isolation
virtual interactions
mental health
feelings of inadequacy
anxiety
depression
misinformation
destabilize
privacy concerns
data breaches
productivity
foster connections
educational content
social activism

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5
band
Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. To what extent do you agree.
The issue of whether children are given too much free time, in my view, is not about the amount of free time they have, but about whether this time can be spent on socially productive activities.
7
band
Developments in science and technology have caused environmental problems.Some people think that a simpler way of lift will protect environment, while others believe that science and technology can solve environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The problems related to the environment have been closely related to science and digital thriving. Some people argue that protecting the environment does not require complicated ways, while others proclaim that science and technology may be the solution. This essay will elaborate on both views and show my greater tendency toward the latter notion.
5
band
You have been invited to attend an interview for a place on a course of study at a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot go to the interview at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor. In your letter explain why you cannot keep the appointment apologise and offer to arrange a new appointment ask how long the interview will be, and whether there will be any tests during it
Dear Sir, I am writing to you to inform you that it is not possible for me to attend the interview you have arranged for me in your college.
4
band
Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People have investigated a lot of science nation and these research should be taken on by governments rather than private associations. In my opinion both of them are required by the people but ı agree with this topic. ı will outline the reason in the following paragraphs.
4.5
band
Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
Childern are the pillar for society. From the childhood, child development is very primary motive for every parents. Some people thinks that children should study at home and other thinks children should go to school. Lets discuss both views in the following paragraph.

Many people believe that social networking sites have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. To what extent do you agree.

Developments in science and technology have caused environmental problems.Some people think that a simpler way of lift will protect environment, while others believe that science and technology can solve environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.