The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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THIS
PIE CHART ILLUSTRATES A SURVEY OF TOURISTS VISITED
IN FOUR TYPES OF ATTRACTIVE Correct pronoun usage
WHO VISITED
PLACE
IN BRITAIN IN 1999. Fix the agreement mistake
PLACES
OVERALL
, MUSEUMS AND GALLERIES HAD THE MOST PERCENTAGE WHILE
BLACK POOL PLEASURE BEACH REMAINED THE HIGHEST PORTION IN
THEME PARKS.
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OF
INITIALLY
, TOURISTS PREFERRED GOING TO MUSEUMS AND GALLERIES MORE THAN OTHERS, WITH 37% IN A SURVEY. MOREOVER
, THE NUMBER OF PEOPLE WENT
TO HISTORIC Correct pronoun usage
WHO WENT
HOUSE
AND MONUMENTS MADE UP AROUND 15%, Fix the agreement mistake
HOUSES
DISPITE
WILDLIFE PARKS AND Correct your spelling
DESPITE
ZOO
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ZOOS
REPRESENTED
THE LEAST PROPORTION, WITH JUST UNDER Wrong verb form
REPRESENTING
A
TEN IN 1999.
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apply
ON THE OTHER HAND
, THE POPULARTY
OF BLACKPOOL PLEASURE BEACH STOOD AT 47% Correct your spelling
POPULARITY
AMOUNG
OTHERS PLACE IN THEME PARKS. Correct your spelling
AMONG
FURTHERMORE
, ALTON TOWERS ACCOUNTED FOR 17%, WAS
HIGHER THAN PLEASURELAND, SOUTHPORT BY 1% ONLY. THE CHESSINGTON WORLD OF ADVENTURES AND LEGOLAND, WINDSOR HAVE AN ON PAR OF EACH PERCENTAGE BY A TEN.Correct pronoun usage
WHICH WAS
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