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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task
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The given graph compares forested
land
 of the world over
15-year
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a 15-year
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 period, starting from 1990 to 2005. Generally, as the whole time, Europe had the biggest forested
land
 ( 1001 ha in 2005 ) and
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in
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contrastly
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contrast
 Oceania had the smallest forested
land
 (197 ha in 2005). It's clear from the table that Europe and Asia were the only places
of
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in
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 which the forest area
were
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 increasing. But Asia rise a slight increase from 576 ha (in 1990) to 584 ha ( in 2005), only half
Europe
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of Europe
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. Africa and South America had
a significant fluctuations
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significant fluctuations
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. The former saw
also
downward
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a downward
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 from 749 ha in 1990 to
tumbed
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number
691 ha in 2005. And the
later
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latter
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 too, from 946 ha to 882 ha. North
Amercia
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America
 and Oceania
remaining
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remain
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 maintain year by year, just a down insignificantly. The forest of North America had a slight drop from 708 ha to 705 ha and
then
 maintain until 2005. It's noticeable that the forested
land
 of the world
play
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plays
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 an important role in life because it's a source of life for humans.

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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words land with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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