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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#threat #weapons #world #peace #power #energy #technology
Nowadays,
with
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this
 high level of competency between nations to
use
 nuclear
energies
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 has become A controversial debate
due to
 the fact that it can lead to a nuclear war and may destroy billions of People in the blink of an eye. In my opinion, I totally agree that we should alternate our path to the world Without nuclear
energies
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 and
use
 other sources of
energy
.
To begin
 with, even though there is some benefit to using nuclear
energies
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,
but
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some countries could
use
 It for harsh subjects like war. In
this
 case, some countries may
use
this
 technology to achieve their desired goals
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 harming other human beings and
this
 is something we should stand against it. For instance, North Korea has 150 nuclear missiles and they were threatening other nations especially their close Neighbor South Korea with it,
furthermore
, they do not
use
this
 modern technology for a clean way to produce
energy
. So, we should consider the purposes of using nuclear
energy
 to prevent hostilities.
Firstly
, there are other types of producing
energy
that
is
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 more sustainable, safer and more peaceful in Comparison
of
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 nuclear
energy
.
Secondly
, the malfunction of a nuclear plant is a crucial part of nuclear disaster and for that reason, I am not optimistic about using nuclear
for producing
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energy
.
Finally
, we Have seen that a nuclear disaster
for example
 what happened in Chernobyl or Fukushima could cause so many difficulties for mankind. In conclusion, there is no doubt that using nuclear
energy
 could be harmful
for
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 world peace and it can Cause brutal wars. I think we should consider other types of producing
energy
 which
they
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are much safer and more peaceful to
use
.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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