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a lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism industry.

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Tourism is a
way
 of
life
 in most countries nowadays. Most places in the continents depend on
sight
 seeing as a means of livelihood.The advantages of tourism
is
Suggestion
are
 that it increases the growth of the country and it's
also
 promotes the
culture
 and their
way
 of
life
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life, however
however
 the disadvantages is that
its
the thing named or in question
it
 gives individual to have assess to their opinion about the nation they visit and
also
 some people disrespect their
culture
.
Firstly
,
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,
people coming into another place for
sight
 seeing enable the economy to increase.In a situation where we have a lot of persons obtaining visas of a particular city in other to come and
sight
 see.The money they are using to obtain the document for entry is going to the particular nation they are visiting.
This
 alone is increasing their population when they arrive there they will still spend money on hotels
,
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,
foods and transportation.
This
 alone has added
values
Suggestion
value
 to the city in a great
way
.
Further more
in addition
Furthermore
,
Accept space
,
the disadvantages
is
Suggestion
are
 that any bad experience that happens to the individual will forever be erasable. A recent study
,
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,
shows that in 2010 almost 10million people applied for Dubai visa.
Secondly
,
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,
most people generally are willing to learn about other places
way
 of
life
.
Although
 it is always good to learn other peoples belief and
way
 of
life
.
For instance
, it's helps to know how to behave and act upon arrival.It is always good to know some particular details about the city you want to visit.
Also
,
Accept space
,
the
disavantages
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantages
 is that some of the visitors might disrespect the rules of the land
,
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,
there by
steping
any maneuver made as part of progress toward a goal
stepping
 on toes which can cause misunderstandings.A recent research shows that 20,000 people attends Osun festival in Nigeria yearly in order to learn their
culture
 and
way
 of
life
. In conclusion
,
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,
sight
 seeing is learning about
different places
Suggestion
the different place's culture
different place's culture
culture
, belief and ways of
life
.
Moreover
 the advantages outweighs the disadvantages because people are always willing to travel outside their land to learn new things.Tourism is a
way
 of
life
 and it's
add
Suggestion
added
 more values to most places because
its
the thing named or in question
it
 improves their revenues and increases their sizes.
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