Write a letter to your friend who is moving to a new home. 1. You have time to help her 2. How can you help her move? 3. Ask questions about new home?

Dear Priya, Hope
this
letter brings you good health and wealth. I heard from Sandra that you are moving to a new
home
near to AlNadha Lulu park in Sharjah. I hope you are excited to shift to the new location. I’m glad to help you to move your
things
from
old
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your old
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home
to
the
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your
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new
home
. I’ll be free on Saturday and Sunday and heard from Sandra that you
also
shifting on a weekend. I’ll come to your
home
on
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at
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the weekend and will do the packing together. I’ve seen some videos on YouTube about packing
things
and moving to other locations.
That
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was
easy
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an easy
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and simple
steps
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which we follow it’ll be
time saving
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process for us to move
things
.
Also
, we can use our own car to relocate as Sandra
also
coming to give a hand so with 3 cars including your’s we can shift. To know about the place and get the
things
to correct location share me your new flat address.
Also
, give me the Google map location and inform the security if any before we bring your household items
,
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so that we can enter without any trouble. I hope to see you soon and
awaiting
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for
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your reply. Best wishes Saru
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