The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies between 2011 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The above-mentioned line graph shows the

stock

price

of four leading hi-tech companies between 2011 and 2016. It is clear from the graph that over the time from 2011 to 2016 total valuation of Facebook has raised

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a constant rate,

hence

making

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upward

while

on the other hand

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prices

of yahoo

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declined. The

stock

price

of Apple has faced a lot of up and down

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the

stock

prices

of Google

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remained constant over the period. The

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price

of

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apple has moved very drastically, there has been a rapid increase in the

prices

from 2011 to 2012 and

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stocked

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reached

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its peak

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30,000 but suddenly

next

year the

prices

fell to 5,500 (approximately) and after

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there have not been

such

a huge change. The

stock

prices

of Facebook and Yahoo have started from the same position ie. 5,500 (Approx) but both have different

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in their moment as Facebook has moved upward on the other yahoo has a diminishing movement in its

stock

price

but google has remained constant for all 6 years.